day by day you seem to deteriate yet, you dont seem to care
you have never once said this isn't fair
when the doctor's use you as a pin cushion, you don't cry
i don't believe i could be that strong
that's no lie
when i tell you that i'm making a you a poem you say, good for you
i slyly smile and say, i'll read it through
hush, hush little man, your time's almost come to an end
there is no limit to the money we will spend
when you are my rock
holding me to this chaos we call the world
i say, take another let me keep my rock
i puzzle over myself and say, i dont know the last line
you calmly say, don't worry it will come, everything will be fine
i wish you would have stayed true to your word
three in the morning i heard chirping, thought it was a bird
rubbed the sleep from my eyes and saw it was my phone
it was aunt jane, she was crying and pleading Nick won't wake up
for the next week i spent countless hours pleading with God to let you live
but, he was not willing to forgive
on the dreary day we each said our last goodbye's
you lay in the best casket that money could buy
when my turn came up i knew what to do
i still had an ode to you
i softly kissed your forehead and said in a cracked voice, i made a promise to you before hand
i hope you like it
hush, hush little man your journy's almost come to an end
there is no limit to what money we will spend when,
you are my rock
i say, take another let me keep my rock
i would have gladly have been that other
Monday, September 22, 2008
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... I don't know exactly where to start. The first line was magnificant, the perfect line to catch the readers attention. You explained a story in few detailed words and that isn't something a lot of people can do so easily. I liked your repetition, and the few rhymes you fit into the poem. It was really beautiful.
yey my first comment
completely awesome... and I can so relate to this poem so it makes it even better to me ^^ very good work <3
btw, this is Ina :D
aww thanks ina
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